I pushed open the freshly painted white
gate and rushed up the steps of my son's newly purchased brick house.
He'd just gotten a new gas grill last Sunday for father's day and
was anxious to try it out. It was the first BBQ of the summer. I
banged on the over-sized green door; once, twice, three times. No one
came. I called out to John and then Linda; there was no answer. I
turned the knob and stepped inside.
“Hello? Anyone home? Where is
everybody?” It was oddly quiet. Something was wrong.
I heard a delighted squeal from down
the hall. My grandchildren! I ran towards the sound, but stopped dead
cold as I entered the living room. My eyes went to my five year old
granddaughter Annabelle standing motionless in the center of the
room. There was blood everywhere. Everywhere except on little
Annabelle. Horror consumed my soul. There were three lifeless bodies
in the middle of the room and she stood over them holding a bloody
knife; her clothes were spotless.
I screamed at her and she turned to
face me, her big blue eyes shining with glee.
“I killed them grandma. Dan-Dan told
me to.” She smiled and held the up the knife.
I opened my mouth to speak but my voice
cracked as fear strangled my words. I swallowed hard.
“Baby, put the knife down and come
over to me honey. We've got to get you out of here. Now.”
“But grandma, Dan-Dan said to kill everyone in the house. That means you too.” She took a step towards me.
“But grandma, Dan-Dan said to kill everyone in the house. That means you too.” She took a step towards me.
“Annabelle... put the knife
down.”
“Dan-Dan says you don't love me.” She looked down at my son, his wife, and my other granddaughter. “They didn't love me. That's why they had to die.”
“Dan-Dan says you don't love me.” She looked down at my son, his wife, and my other granddaughter. “They didn't love me. That's why they had to die.”
“Annabelle... honey... where is
Dan-Dan now? Did he leave you alone to do this? Has he gone away now?
Come to Grams, you don't want to stain your pretty dress... Come on
baby, put the knife down and I'll take you to get an ice cream,
okay?” I choked out the words as I felt bile rising in my throat.
She looked around the room as her
expression changed from child like innocence to that of a trapped
animal. She let out a blood curdling screech and flung herself down
on the floor, the pool of blood soaking into her pristine cotton
dress. She was having a seizure. I ran to her and pried the knife
from her hand. I watched helplessly as her eyes rolled back in her
head and she convulsed. I couldn't call an ambulance. All I could do
was watch in horror as she took her last breath. I cradled her limp
body in my arms and sobbed. Whose fault was this? No one had listened
when she told them about her imaginary friend, even when she said he
had made her do bad things.
©2014
Garden Summerland
I absolutely love the story you created here. The innocence within the child's voice was lingering with every word, and the thrilling mood was certainly effortlessly present from the get go. What inspired you to write such a gruesome and dark story?
ReplyDeleteThank you, for reading & commenting. I am thrilled you enjoyed the story. :) Not sure where inspiration came from on this one... creepy huh?
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