tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4648872630720280430.post2073266631166122267..comments2023-06-26T04:30:01.648-07:00Comments on The Garden of Good & Evil: UsedLoLa Autryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18323978896715901256noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4648872630720280430.post-56889932505756776872011-06-10T14:06:22.621-07:002011-06-10T14:06:22.621-07:00Thank you, your feedback means a lot. I think in s...Thank you, your feedback means a lot. I think in short snappy sentences. The descriptive always feels like a narrative thing... And your comments are most appreciated.LoLa Autryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323978896715901256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4648872630720280430.post-4675000670051321672011-06-10T13:23:46.334-07:002011-06-10T13:23:46.334-07:00I really enjoyed this, and thought it was very wel...I really enjoyed this, and thought it was very well written. I thought the short, snappy sentences contrasting with the longer, more descriptive one's was very effective - you use this very well in almost everything you write. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com